For his oral and written language development, Ivo was asked to write about an activity he had this summer. Before writing, he filled out a graphic organizer for his ideas focusing on the 4ws (what, when, where and why) and 1h (how). Then, he wrote a paragraph about the picture and read it to his teachers.
A Thrilling Adventure
By: Ivo Nevalga
This picture is about me and my cousin Uncle Jaja riding the Zipline. The Zipline was located somewhere in Cagayan de oro. From Cebu to Cagayan de Oro, it took us 8 hours to go there by boat and another 3 hours to the Zipline by land. This happened last April 28, 2010. We went to the Zipline to have a thrilling adventure with my cousins. When we rode the Zipline, it felt like you were flying very fast. And it was fun and enjoyable. We also rode the other Zipline, the longest one.
Ivo is an incoming 3rd year high school student. He enjoys doing extreme activities like zipline riding and rafting with cousins and relatives.
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