Monday, May 10, 2010

Motorcycle

For his Written Language Development, JM, who is currently enrolled in a Reading Program in Wordlab School, Inc. – Alabang was required to do an opinion essay with the use of a simpler version of Planning, Organizing (Topic Sentence, 3 Reasons, Example, Evaluation) and Writing protocol .

In the essay below, he was tasked to share his opinion about the use of motorcycles.
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MOTORCYCLE

I don’t think that every body should have motorcycles because first it is small. When the car is moving it is hard to see the motorcycle. Second, motorcycle should be in short roads only, just like going to school. Third, motorcycle is dangerous because there are many deaths about it. I suggest to the people to buy a big motorcycle to use for big roads.

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JM will be on his 3rd year of High School in the coming school year. He enjoys playing bowling with his family during weekends and also joins competitions in this sport.

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