Friday, October 19, 2012

Gail and the Maid by Alejandro


In the picture below, 2nd Grader Alejandro properly sequenced and described the events that happened in the controlled text, Gail and the Maid.



Alejandro’s Written Answer:
What Alejandro meant:
Gail saw a snail.

She put the snail in a gray pail.

The maid got mad and the maid put her hands on her waist.

The maid got mad to Gail and got scerd.
The maid got mad to Gail and she got scared.
Gail fecht a pail of water and threw it on the maid.
Gail fetched a pail of water and threw it on the maid.
The maid waild.
The maid wailed.
The maid wanted to faint.

Gail said sory to the maid.
Gail said sorry to the maid.


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